Funny

Im a big spidey fan so i'ts hard to laugh at a parody but this was very funny

nice touch with the monkey craping everywhere much like a real monkey horrible nasty bastards

Nice

thats awesome i love that bit its from summoner

Needs Work

Your movie isn't bad it has potential if you can address these complaints

the intro was too long and drawn out.

I don't want to sound like an sob here but was the lisp on "silent" intentional if so drop it.

and try drawing eyes on your characters.